#27【寫作技巧】如何寫出「不爛」的文章？

獨立子句是什麼：https://youtu.be/9fExrGY7Klc 英文班已結束 ---------------------------------- 1. 條列要在最後一個物品前加逗號 I bought red, white and pink roses. (X) I bought red, white, and pink roses. (O) ---------------------------------- 2. 補充說明句子，要放在逗號裡 My father, a tall man is very strict. (X) My father, a tall man, is very strict. (O) ---------------------------------- 3. 兩個獨立子句，絕不能用逗號連結 I have a large dog, the dog eats a lot. (X) ---------------------------------- 修正方法有三個： 一、用對等連接詞連結。 I have a large dog, and the dog eats a lot. 二、用分號 I have a large dog; the dog eats a lot. 三、直接用句點 I have a large dog. The dog eats a lot. ---------------------------------- 4. 主動一致 Jack like to read a lot. (X) Jack likes to read a lot. (O) ---------------------------------- each, either, everyone, everybody… 是單數主詞 Everybody think he has a unique sense of humor. (X) Everybody thinks he has a unique sense of humor. (O) ---------------------------------- 6. 修飾句跟被修飾對象要接在一起 Walking slowly down the road, he saw a woman accompanied by two children. (X) Walking slowly down the road, the woman was accompanied by two children. (O) ---------------------------------- 7. 用正面形容事情 He was not very often on time = He was usually late did not remember = forgot did not pay attention to = ignored not honest = dishonest ---------------------------------- 8. 省略不必要單字 the question as to whether = whether there is no doubt but that = no doubt the reason why is that = because ---------------------------------- 9. the fact that 常常可以省略 owing to the fact that = since in spite of the fact that = though/although ---------------------------------- YouTube頻道：https://goo.gl/L7qFRQ IG「英文不難」：https://www.instagram.com/english.great.easy/